This is my first time to feel very disappointed to the core, this story has a good premise but sadly bad execution. I'm okay with cliche but will despite it when it being used too much, plus the author is over promoting their patreon. I mean sure it is your story but can you tone down the promotion? It's so annoying
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LIKEMistakes are ok but the worst thing is even aftwr making mistakes the author doesnot try to correct somw mistakes and cobtonuw revieving bad review but still updating ,I admire courage but he atleast needs to fix somethings to improve but I see no improvement ,Its like he is just writing and doesnor care about readers POV even slightest because its not pne or two ,There are many well croticiswd review yes some are dumb but hey atleast try but NOPe Hw will write ,It do3snot mattwr you read or not