shameless author review. i am well aware my writing is not top tier, please give me constructive feedback, i am just looking to improve my writing since this is something i enjoy doing. thanks. -Author

thank you for reading

4 chapters in. there’s time to add so much more. it’s not the end of the world

appreciate the feedback. i didn’ think too much about why he cant remember anything, i thought it would be easier to avoid filling the first chapter with backstory

this is a work of art

nice chapter

I enjoyed reading this, nice work