JoshLane
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JoshLane11mthReplied to fox_silverPretty much everything about him was lucky, aside from his comatose mother. Maybe that's why I rained hell on him.- JoshLane11mthReplied to LeBlorf
The original name was Ikilux. I don't remember how I got it, though. I changed it since it didn't look like an actual word.
Lightweaving was originally an ability that was created for civilians during the Holy War. It manipulates mana in its natural setting to create constructs. However, the magic wasn't used as a form of weapon but as a utility instead since using it in that way would just break the construct altogether. - JoshLane1yrReplied to LeBlorfCh 1 Chapter 1 - Who I Am
- JoshLane1yrReplied to fox_silver
Basically, an everyman is an ordinary and humble character who every reader can relate to
Synopsis: No one thought that Max Hutton, a seemingly nobody who was raised in the countryside by his farmer parents, would discover his insane potential as a Maven. Join Max as he battles evil villains and demons as he slowly becomes a Hero everyman! - JoshLane1yrReplied to NAHYAN09Ch 1 Chapter 1 - Who I Am
- JoshLane1yrReplied to FaierCh 1 Chapter 1 - Who I Am
- JoshLane1yrPosted
I'm honestly loving it, so far. Although the formatting can be a bit distracting, the story so far is amazing. It's a change of pace from what I usually read where it's usually the ML that's pining for the FL. In here, the FL actually wronged the ML and is trying to make up for it, while the ML has supposedly moved on. Good luck to you, author!
- JoshLane1yrPosted
It honestly looks like a manuscript for a show/movie and there are some formatting error, especially with the punctuation marks, but it seems like it's getting better. However, getting past of all that, it really is a story with a lot of potential. It just needs proper formatting, in terms of the punctuation marks, and a proper pacing when introducing characters because I was immediately thrusted into the world without any prior knowledge of who the characters are as persons.
- JoshLane1yrReplied to Inspiron_123
Yeah, I did consider going the harem route, but it wouldn't exactly fit with what I had in mind
5. In this novel, there will be no harem. - JoshLane1yrReplied to DaoPrince10
- JoshLane1yrReplied to MediocreSkater
Read the next chapter if you want to know what happened to her
Stopping in my tracks, I sighed. I'm getting attached to something that doesn't physically exist. Haha, if this keeps up, I may end up marrying her. - JoshLane1yrReplied to fox_silver
"An ordinary and humble character, the everyman is generally a protagonist whose benign conduct fosters the audience's wide identification with him." -Wikipedia
Synopsis: No one thought that Max Hutton, a seemingly nobody who was raised in the countryside by his farmer parents, would discover his insane potential as a Maven. Join Max as he battles evil villains and demons as he slowly becomes a Hero everyman!