marionetty

Honestly, I really liked the last chapter and I don't understand why there are so many complaints. I don't think you need to change the chapter, just follow your heart from now on and continue the good story.

Seriously author, if you wanted to bring up this subject of morality, choose another Marvel or DC reality for it. Choosing to bring this in Marvel Zombies and on top of that with Makima showing this was a bad choice. I advise you to change the chapter or even redo it.

I found the idea of the story interesting, but the way things were played in the chapter seemed strange to me. I don't know if it's because I'm reading this translated, but the lack of clarity hindered my reading a little. But other than that, it seems to be very interesting, I'll let it accumulate more chapters before continuing reading.

bro, that won't have Yuri, right?

Reading all the chapters released so far, I can say that this story has potential. The only problem is that the author, in my opinion, added some things that left the story unconscious. I understand why the protagonist is a layman at the beginning of the story, having been thrown into another world out of nowhere without his consent, but man, you could have done it better. In I was wondering, his wish was for a hot woman and he had eyes for only one man, who was supposed to be the protagonist, but from what you've shown us of the background so far, it doesn't look like she has eyes for him. Of course, what I said now could be wrong and she could only start to be interested in her now that she really is the protagonist. But even if she didn't like him before and it really was just a contract marriage, I don't think she would let the disrespect towards Damian reach that level, after all, even though they are Aoenas by contract, he is still her husband and he is being Wouldn't being disrespected like that be disrespectful towards her? Regarding his powers, well, he hasn't progressed much yet for me to give my opinion, although I don't find the vampire inside him or the servant of Jesus interesting. Anyway, even with my outburst, I consider that this story and the author have potential, even with some elements of Chinese history in this fic. And I hope the author continues to write this story, because I was very interested in this premise. Sorry for any grammar errors, I wrote using Google Translate.

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Came from google translator, sorry for the mistakes.

The author is wonderful for puts me in a mix of laughs and cries.

I was about to ask for the name of the novel, but author-san beat me to it and put it at the end.

author-san is addicted to inner voice theme.