No not harem. :D

Hi, what are you confused about? The flow of the story?

Hi, you're right this was at the wrong chapter - this is actually at chapter 25 titled Silver Bear. My apologies.

Thanks! It's really encouraging to see reviews like yours! Will work hard on this :D

Glad the plot and concept took your interest :D Hope you enjoy it!

Thanks for the support!

Thanks alot for showing the love <3 Haha! I'll keep up the hard work. Really appreciate you for showing up in the comments!

Thanks for your feedback. I think so too - it was 3,100 words and so much more than what I wanted to write. So for now, I've kept the prologue but moved it into a chapter of it's own. So that if others wants to they can skip straight to the real first chapter. The prologue helps me and some other as a setup so I hope that this will keep the pacing. :D Appreciate your comment!

I like the MC, I mean most of the character is well designed. I haven't caught up to the latest chapter but I do enjoy a bit of the suspense. The tension is there and it provide some expectation to what's gonna happen. Looking forward to how to story develop :D

Your character and their development are fascinating to read, and I'm inquisitive about how the character will develop more in the future. I enjoy the genre but would like to know more about what the college in this story is like?

Thanks for comment!

I guess that is fair, "Lance". But I think the author need to brainstorm abit more. To find a better fit in the world the MC resides in.

:P sorry bout that.

Hehe, I also like Larisa's character the most so far in my story. There will definitely be more of Larisa in future chapters.

Thanks! I really appreciate your comments and compliments! Will work hard to update and keep the story interesting! I did put plenty of effort in the flow of the story :P

Thanks! I really appreciate your comments and compliments! Will work hard to update and keep the story interesting!

The character was ok for me, didn't really fancy their names. I enjoyed the pacing and the flow of words. It was comfortable to read. I think this book have potential, gotta keep an eye out for more updates in the future.

You know what? I whole-heartedly agree with what you and a few other readers commented. It was a wall of exposition and it have been bothering me for a while. But I've reworked it now and am quite happy with it. It's still a setup but it's something more like a movie intro, at least in my imagination. I hope you'll enjoy it as much as I do.

What can I say, I was inspired by Tolkien hahaha

Thanks! It's really encouraging me to continue writing! :D