The character was ok for me, didn't really fancy their names. I enjoyed the pacing and the flow of words. It was comfortable to read. I think this book have potential, gotta keep an eye out for more updates in the future.
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LIKEI guess that is fair, "Lance". But I think the author need to brainstorm abit more. To find a better fit in the world the MC resides in.
Jude_K_1656:Lance actually good name for his character which means: the Spear of Destiny