ColiJiyo
I like writing it because it lets me use my imagination to create a story where no one has ever been before. ☕ Currently working on my books: The Ash Earth, Nocs, and D.no
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Thanks for your feedback. I think so too - it was 3,100 words and so much more than what I wanted to write. So for now, I've kept the prologue but moved it into a chapter of it's own. So that if others wants to they can skip straight to the real first chapter. The prologue helps me and some other as a setup so I hope that this will keep the pacing. :D Appreciate your comment!
You know what? I whole-heartedly agree with what you and a few other readers commented. It was a wall of exposition and it have been bothering me for a while. But I've reworked it now and am quite happy with it. It's still a setup but it's something more like a movie intro, at least in my imagination. I hope you'll enjoy it as much as I do.
What can I say, I was inspired by Tolkien hahaha