The MC is very fool to be a machine.

Eso es verdad.

Writing quality: 5⭐ It is excellent. Stability update: 5⭐ It is stable. Story development: 1⭐ I don't particularly like it, not at all. I hate AIs that talk over your head. You exaggerate the abilities of average players. You exaggerate the importance of training and the science of soccer over the art that is soccer, which is, in my opinion, the true essence of the beautiful game. What the protagonist does as training could not be done by a normal person without getting injured and therefore he should already be the best in the world, incoherence. There is no logic between what the system poses about his skills and the skills of other footballers, especially in terms of talent. Character design: 4⭐ The characters are very alive but I don't end up liking the MC, I find him too rigid, with a constant loser attitude. World background: 5⭐ It's the best thing about this story, no more words.

¿Steven Mangala?

Good reflection.

Good metaphor, good review.

That was a trick lie.

Being so cute makes it look unmanly. Although one's appearance is the least important thing. The most important thing is the charisma, virtue and wisdom of the person.

It is impossible for a family with such a cultivation technique to be poor. For with just one talented individual it would be an army on its own.

-Writing Quality: ⭐⭐⭐⭐. It is not badly written. It has good writing quality. -Updating Stability:⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. This aspect I have not investigated. So it has the maximum. Deserved or not, it doesn't matter. -Story Development:⭐. There is no story development beyond the prologue. The rest is just a carbon copy, either from the manhua or the novel. It is also full of contradictions. Disappointing. -Character Design:⭐⭐. There is no character development. If in the manhua and novel they were already flat, here they are completely one-dimensional. world background:⭐. I saw no description of any kind beyond the fic's prologue. P.S.: This fic is lacking in research and is completely disrespectful to its readers and the original work.

In this chapter only nie li was replaced. What little creativity.

There was a small plot error. Since if the MC tells her about her family's plot, given that ning er is Ziyun's childhood friend then naturally she would go to warn her. The MC was not very clever in this chapter. Disappointment.

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In the wiki it is wrong. At this time Shen fei should be silver 4 or five stars. When he faces ning er he had a gold 1 star rank, hence the error.

If the system didn't interact with the MC then the story would be more compelling. That's the only downside I can find to this fic so far.

I really don't understand how this fanfiction disaster has a 4.9 average. The only thing salvageable about it is the quality of the writing, 4 stars, and the character design, 3 stars. The rest is conspicuous by its absence. The updates, as I read in other reviews, are terribly slow, 2 stars, and that because it already has many chapters already written, a good 84. The world is Pokémon, not yugioh, apparently, with that of collecting monster spirits in bulk, well what to say, 2 stars. And finally, the story development, this is the worst of it honestly, 1 star: The author doesn't know the rules of the game and apparently makes up a few rules along the way, like that time he activated a magic card from the hand during the opponent's turn, or when he played two Pot of Greed in the same turn, blatantly ignoring the season's list of bans and limitations. And that's just from above, surely there are more and worse. Conclusion, if you are a mediocre reader who doesn't appreciate yugioh and also doesn't know anything about it like 90% of the people who wrote a review of 5 in all parameters here, you will like this fanfiction, no doubt, it's exciting, the author knows how to give it his touch is very good at giving coba. If not, you will be very disappointed. Well, just by saying that the author doesn't even respond to the comments you write to improve his own story you'll already get an idea of the subject. He'll probably delete this review, who knows, that's how bad people are nowadays. I'm also likely to be verbally assaulted by other fan readers in defense of this mess of fanfiction. How sad it makes me.

I guess I'm quitting here. I'll go post a review.

Another OC card, this time from the Meikyū brothers. Disappointing. There are more than five thousand cards and the author decides to invent new ones.

Apparently the autor also forgot the Timaeus Eye for the Dark Magician Girl the Dragon Knight.

Cyber Blader is level 7, not 6, like Okha.