Mihai_Ionut
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The story is good, not boring at all, some parts of it were like... Is this really Itachi ? But then I was thinking that 90% of the fan fiction in general who are not OC are like this, no matter how much you know a character, you are not the author of the manga, you don't really know how we would react in that situation, but you've done good bro and with the grammar,i've seen far worse,much worse, but the later chapters you started to improve it,don't listen to the haters, they would hate no matter what.
To say something like this about the dxd world :))) c'mon mate
I think you got it a little further than you should, why would a kid send assassin's after Itachi ? Everyone would know that it was him and his family, and after ? War in Hell ,they are not so stupid to do that + he is arrogant, he wants to humiliate Itachi on his own, to show him that he is better, this is the kind of person Riser is.
So they grow up together ? How cute is that .
For me personally not being a native in English, I can still understand because I read in the same way.
That's a dope idea