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neobenmike
neobenmikeLv54yrneobenmike

The writing is good with few typos, forced relationships, toddlers declaring themselves as the wife, old fox kurumi getting hot and bothered by a 5 year old, plot holes, op mc

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Life in DXD

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Mihai_Ionut
Mihai_IonutLv1Mihai_Ionut

I think I just dodged a bullet here , thx.

novel_fanatic
novel_fanaticLv13novel_fanatic

Yh its way too forced if an ***** is getting those 'urges' for a child...in fact thats just ruining the whole novel since its just going over board.

Dead_and_gone
Dead_and_goneLv3Dead_and_gone

Thanks man for ur honest review we really appreciate it dodged a bullet here

David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

Dodge the FBI. Thanks

DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4DearCompanion

Warning NTR, he after some milfs but in many cases, they just tease him and he just leave them to do 'it' with their husband. He heal misla bael from her sleep but then another year pass by without him taking her, only visiting her sometimes and author even make it like she have feelings for him, of course her husband would do 'it' with her

DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4DearCompanion

But overall it's good before he after mil*s

DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4DearCompanion

Mc is a b*tch, he didn't kill riser for harassing his woman again and again because of the plot, even though he could eliminate an entire faction by himself, not to mention a small fry phenex family

Croissance
CroissanceLv4Croissance

What wrong with you dude, I don't care if you don't like it, but why do you incite others ppl not to read this, netorare?, in what chapter does this fanfic contain netorare? do you even know the difference between netori and netorare? and what do you mean by 'do it' ?, what you say is baseless and you even copy paste your comment......rly dude?...

DearCompanion:Warning NTR, he after some milfs but in many cases, they just tease him and he just leave them to do 'it' with their husband. He heal misla bael from her sleep but then another year pass by without him taking her, only visiting her sometimes and author even make it like she have feelings for him, of course her husband would do 'it' with her
DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4DearCompanion

Use your logic dude, imagine your wife got a sleeping disease for years and then she is healed, of course sometimes within 6 months after her wake up you would have already do it with your beautiful wife. It's the same with mc, if he take her after she wakes up then it would not become NTR for mc, unless he doesn't take her to begin with but it's not the case for this mc bc he is after all milfs

Croissance:What wrong with you dude, I don't care if you don't like it, but why do you incite others ppl not to read this, netorare?, in what chapter does this fanfic contain netorare? do you even know the difference between netori and netorare? and what do you mean by 'do it' ?, what you say is baseless and you even copy paste your comment......rly dude?...
JadeElemental_11
JadeElemental_11Lv11JadeElemental_11

F,bloemfontein xczo

novel_fanatic:Yh its way too forced if an ***** is getting those 'urges' for a child...in fact thats just ruining the whole novel since its just going over board.
Akash_Singh_8031
Akash_Singh_8031Lv2Akash_Singh_8031

Thanks for the chapter

Akash_Singh_8031
Akash_Singh_8031Lv2Akash_Singh_8031

Thanks for chapter

SekaiDxD
SekaiDxDLv11SekaiDxD

Degenerate.

DearCompanion:Use your logic dude, imagine your wife got a sleeping disease for years and then she is healed, of course sometimes within 6 months after her wake up you would have already do it with your beautiful wife. It's the same with mc, if he take her after she wakes up then it would not become NTR for mc, unless he doesn't take her to begin with but it's not the case for this mc bc he is after all milfs
Daoistskyshaker
DaoistskyshakerLv15Daoistskyshaker

I agree the writing is good and this chapter is also right on point.

YunZhiXue
YunZhiXueLv4YunZhiXue

Thx

Archonn
ArchonnLv5Archonn

thanks man you're a life saver

AkashiRyuma
AkashiRyumaLv2AkashiRyuma

TQ CP

BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

I think all the people who voted 5 stars for this shit should be banned. They are the reason why this sites ranking system is broken and useless, and only useful to know not to even touch anything below 4stars, but that's it. then again, i bet most of those accounts are bots or authors fake accounts.

Nevarus
NevarusLv5Nevarus

giving it too much credit. lots of typos, wrong versions of words, incorrect words, poor sentence structure, etc. I could repost this after correcting the mistakes, and you wouldn't necessarily know that it was the same story.