The story is good, not boring at all, some parts of it were like... Is this really Itachi ? But then I was thinking that 90% of the fan fiction in general who are not OC are like this, no matter how much you know a character, you are not the author of the manga, you don't really know how we would react in that situation, but you've done good bro and with the grammar,i've seen far worse,much worse, but the later chapters you started to improve it,don't listen to the haters, they would hate no matter what.
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