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The novel started off great. Everything was perfect, but after chapter180, everything feels like filler. It feels like the author is dragging the story just to earn money from people. If this continues, I'm dropping the novel. The story hasn't progressed in the last 60 chapters. Classic greedy Arthur running his novel.
This story is just boring. Nothing really happens, and all 28 free chapters are just one big training arc. I didn't get a single moment of excitement or hype. It was a tough read, to be honest. Maybe things get better later on, but I'm not gonna waste hours slogging through garbage just to get to one decent chapter.
The story started off really well, but as we passed chapter 200, it began to slow down significantly. There were too many characters introduced that we didn't really care about. At some point, it felt like every chapter was just filler and the story didn't progress at all. Additionally, the main characters doesn't get any stronger beyond chapter 50. Personally, I'm dropping this because it has only gotten worse with each chapter. The story its just not moving.
Very bad writing. Just read this paragraph for example. "It was a long time ago— Tribe's warriors fell in battle- Monsters are mean things. A very long time ago, and the children cried— Monsters are real mean things, aren't they. It was a terrible event, a terrible experience. The village had never seen such a thing (as war), but now they were forced to see it. Never been acquainted with such an ill, yes sir, never. ...Now they were."
Hella sus