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The story started off really well, but as we passed chapter 200, it began to slow down significantly. There were too many characters introduced that we didn't really care about. At some point, it felt like every chapter was just filler and the story didn't progress at all. Additionally, the main characters doesn't get any stronger beyond chapter 50. Personally, I'm dropping this because it has only gotten worse with each chapter. The story its just not moving.

The Villain's Story

Blazuku

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Ahaha...the thing I wanted to focus more on is the other characters, I want them to have some depth as well. Thank you for the review and thank you for reading my novel