Very bad writing. Just read this paragraph for example. "It was a long time ago— Tribe's warriors fell in battle- Monsters are mean things. A very long time ago, and the children cried— Monsters are real mean things, aren't they. It was a terrible event, a terrible experience. The village had never seen such a thing (as war), but now they were forced to see it. Never been acquainted with such an ill, yes sir, never. ...Now they were."
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