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Light_Lucifer2yrCommentedThis chapter has been deleted.- Light_Lucifer2yrReplied to Light_LuciferThis chapter has been deleted.
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GI won't but Keiqing surely willđđ
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That first reply.
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Thnx mate
Wind magic. I wonder if I have more though? Pulling once again I focus on something that feels a little more unstable than the peaceful wind I brought forth a second ago. I could feel my body heating up, radiating from my core outwards and my hands felt the power build up until I released it. Small flames had escaped from my fists and I quickly had to get some water to put out the small fire. - Light_Lucifer2yrReplied to SocioPhobia
Well, I think I've read everything you said, And I still assume, my review has points but since I can't express everything in a single comment, others couldn't understand my point. Look when I said the fanfic is off, I actually meant the character & world in it. I remember kathyln being cold because of her responsibilities as the future queen since her child age. And you are saying, she became Mc girlfriend(i think) because he saved her. So, if mc wasn't there. Kathyln tata bye bye Btw I have read the whole story now. And I still wanted to talk about other things but since you don't have that much time, I will excuse myself. Also I wanted to recommend you two things, 1. About your problems of mc development & writing, I don't know how much novel you read but I prefer you to read( in some free times) the best japanese novel as you might find your answer there. 2. Mainly why I wrote this comment is because I want to say this, We all are grateful that you can post 14 chps a week but I think you should really reread while posting. Nobody is going to complain if the update is slower while the writing is better than that. Your story is already good for that. Only some skeptical readers like me will complain about story. Obviously, a single author can't provide a story perfer by varities of readers. And you say writing is fun. so, you write. well my fellow, recollecting your own mistakes is refreshful. Ok, last line was ridiculous but seriously this book has a good potential, don't let it sink.
- Light_Lucifer2yrCommentedCh 8 To gain?? 2
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Council of man approves.
(AN: No he didn't and will never tell anyone about his powers, even Tess âŚI don't know why ppl tell others about their powerâŚjust show what you can do and let them use their brains to figured it out) - Light_Lucifer2yrCommented
Saving princess?? Nah! I will just traumatized her. Way to go Author-san
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You made me confused, Was Arthur quadra elemental because of his talent for mana or was he just gifted?
Wind magic. I wonder if I have more though? Pulling once again I focus on something that feels a little more unstable than the peaceful wind I brought forth a second ago. I could feel my body heating up, radiating from my core outwards and my hands felt the power build up until I released it. Small flames had escaped from my fists and I quickly had to get some water to put out the small fire. - Light_Lucifer2yrCommented
Make him freaking Klee!!!!!!
[Quick Author's Note: I actually found out that I misunderstood how mana rotation works. After not reading the books in a while I assumed that it purified the mana core as well, but apparently that is not the case. As Arthur explains this right after Sylvia teleports him away in chapter 10 of the novel. Sooo I'm kind of thinking of making this be another boost of the MC, since he was able to awake a year before Arthur and learned mana rotation roughly 2 years before. I believe it's possible for MR(mana rotation) to purify the mana core. This doesn't change much of how I planned my story, but figured I would say it anyways. - Light_Lucifer2yrCommented
Why am I getting the feeling that these are the words said to king grey in his previous life?
"To what do I owe the pleasure of seeing you twice in as many days, Meredith?" Vincent asked quizzically while adjusting his glasses. - Light_Lucifer2yrCommentedCh 1 Death and Rebirth
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I don't agree with that, he saved the elf princess for no reason, protect others from getting bullied just because they are dwarves. And in the whole story, Arthur is shown as someone who walks in the righteous path. It's just that he cares more about his family. Nothing else
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Hey, author san wanted to ask, will our mc will be an anti-hero or like other mc who tries to protect others for no reason?
This chapter has been deleted. - Light_Lucifer2yrCommentedCh 1 [76] Strength Increase