Juliet_Fredricks
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next chapter please😭😭😭😭 I really want to know what Jared true identity is. and the Liberian who only Breta knows about. I'm dying from suspense.
If this is a translated story then no comments on grammer, but if it's not then I must say your grammer construction needs some work. Get a proofreader to read your work before publishing. I'd give you an honest review, i couldn't read the first chapter finish because of the grammer but I'll try reading the next chapter though. But over all it seems interesting keep up the good work. Also the book cover could really turn people off, Change it.
WOw wow wow, kudos author Only the first chapter and i'm so into the novel PS:i'm so adding this to my library Looking for to reading the rest of the story.😍😍😍