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Item: Remember 1997?
Rating: 4.4

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Proteety_PromiLv32yrProteety_Promi

I like your writing style a lot! The way you started the story really is interesting. Though if you work hard on it and be careful about some points of the story, it will get better!

Remember 1997?

Juliet_Fredricks

Liked it!

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Juliet_FredricksAuthorJuliet_Fredricks

please can you give me pointers please This is my first novel and I really need all the help I can I get

2yr

Proteety_PromiLv3Proteety_Promi

Especially punctuation. You barely used any question mark (?) or full stop (.)

Juliet_Fredricks:please can you give me pointers please This is my first novel and I really need all the help I can I get

2yr

Juliet_FredricksAuthorJuliet_Fredricks

Thanks. I took your advice and did some serious editing (been on it since morning😅)although I haven't edited the previous chapters. I plan on doing that though, I just published another chapter(edited), check it out and tell me how it is.

Proteety_Promi:Especially punctuation. You barely used any question mark (?) or full stop (.)

2yr