Review Detail of Juliet_Fredricks in The True Purity of Good and Evil

If this is a translated story then no comments on grammer, but if it's not then I must say your grammer construction needs some work. Get a proofreader to read your work before publishing. I'd give you an honest review, i couldn't read the first chapter finish because of the grammer but I'll try reading the next chapter though. But over all it seems interesting keep up the good work. Also the book cover could really turn people off, Change it.