Kaux_P
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First of all; thanks for the review. It means a lot. I'll try my best to improve my grammar. Well, I get your point about the son snatching the throne, I too think that I was hasty in that part (maybe I'll rewrite it again to make it clearer.) I wrote 'snatch' because most of the time the power dominates and that's what the king thought. He thought his son would kill him as soon as he gets more powerful than him, so he cleared his obstacle in advance.