Review Detail of Myura_Rivera in Cards of Fate

I really love the storyline author! The plots, the subplots are very interesting! However, I will suggest you Author to narrate the story in a more specific and broadway, so that I can feel that I am in that specific moment. I want to feel the rush of dopamine going through my veins. So far I like the story very much. Go further author, as a friend, reader, and adviser I have got your back!. Good luck with your first-ever story. and YOU right there! Do caress your eyes on this to-be-masterpiece, trust this humble girl from the internet, this story will bring smiles to your faces! Again, BEST OF LUCK AUTHOR, AND KEEP IT UP!