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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
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    well I don't think author should use our world as background because this may looks like to easy to predict the reaction of characters and also God is real or not is not a issue but how religious beliefs are definitely people who say religion free is basically a hypocrite because most off the time we get to see something in religion such as in Egypt mycology the technology they have are not till this time recreate and plus the issue with how character development I mean how he really accepted reality and first thing he makes is a weapon i mean doesn't he first make any sense and clinge line such makes mc looks like a waking hypocrite how denied reality and wants to concure the continent I don't know but this looks like a pre planned sat up to me literally he created a javelin and gunpowder telling her and also offering her knowledge on medical I think he's mind became radical and revenge on God like shit stuff after death of his wife and daughter and here we sleeping on bed with another woman in just a day after it it makes no sense to me 🤦‍♂️well going to read so more chapter before decision I have bad habit of comparing every such novel with realse that witch so don't matter my opinion on this one

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    The Sage of Einar
    History ¡ KENTARO12100
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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
    Commented

    well I don't think author should use our world as background because this may looks like to easy to predict the reaction of characters and also God is real or not is not a issue but how religious beliefs are definitely people who say religion free is basically a hypocrite because most off the time we get to see something in religion such as in Egypt mycology the technology they have are not till this time recreate and plus the issue with how character development I mean how he really accepted reality and first thing he makes is a weapon i mean doesn't he first make any sense and clinge line such makes mc looks like a waking hypocrite how denied reality and wants to concure the continent I don't know but this looks like a pre planned sat up to me literally he created a javelin and gunpowder telling her and also offering her knowledge on medical I think he's mind became radical and revenge on God like shit stuff after death of his wife and daughter and here we sleeping on bed with another woman in just a day after it it makes no sense to me 🤦‍♂️well going to read so more chapter before decision I have bad habit of comparing every such novel with realse that witch so don't matter my opinion on this one

    Ch 7 Steps to create a miracle 3
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    The Sage of Einar
    History ¡ KENTARO12100
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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
    Commented

    is he going to be a handicap for rest of the story because it sucks🤦‍♂ and like a plot hole I mean all people he met are weaker but better than him and it irritated that he is a Archer with one hand it makes story like forced role and make mc a idiot for power and how he use his mind starting to feel like drop it

    Ch 78 Shopping
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    Unlimited Power 02 - The Ranger's Domain
    Fantasy ¡ ExSoldierLv99
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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
    Commented

    I thought MC has high IQ but to this chapter he act more like an idiot is it plot hole or it's personality and why he act as nothing happens to him when he just barley survive a catastrophe I mean is he even know what he said to black dragon he looks kinda looser to me we'll just gone read more chapter and see what happens and then thinking about drop it or not

    Ch 20 The Portal - Part 2
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    The Abandoned Hunter
    Action ¡ 1st_Manga_KING
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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
    Replied to Belphegor_Sloth

    and more enemies to don't you think after becoming a low key he doesn't get resources I mean you should read solo leveling and second life ranker this mc is dumb as hell man

    Ch 14 Mythril Cube
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    The Rise Of A Porter
    Fantasy ¡ AkshatArpit
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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
    Commented

    ok there's is warning on mc is dumb in summary but the mc in this chapter cross the limit of dumb ness I mean he showing his powers like a child do with his new toy and no one suspect him is it plot holes or the author want mc to be dumb all time and for God sake why he's not thinking about why he got system and to be a low key that's why I hate this kind a story author want to make mc funny but it turns irritating don't he know what happens to his sister when he get exposed for his powers

    Ch 14 Mythril Cube
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    The Rise Of A Porter
    Fantasy ¡ AkshatArpit
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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
    Posted

    ok if you are looking in reviews then to be honest the novel is as usual a Isekai op mc novel where there is no logic for events and if you think about why you should not read this novel because mc meats a divine wolf at chapter 6 so you get what am saying little bit work and here's is our mc with op level powers I kinda think that now days novels are less focus on story and making mc op from start fell kinda Iretating well I also like op mc like solo leveling and second life ranker but the mc in the start are not as op as this novel and I also forgot mention mc is also like man

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    Rebirth: The New Game of Life
    Fantasy ¡ _chomps
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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
    Commented

    I think author took the mc to over the board I mean an 8 day old baby can speak well there is magic but isn't it to suspicious first mc try to become secretive and then blow up his cover like idiot so how others characters react and plus he's from earth and a genius on top of that so don't he have watched movie or anime not only that but his curiosity for things can kill him isn't it is a plot holes in the story or mc become someone who kill animals at age of three

    Ch 7 Forward
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    Technomancer: Genesis
    Fantasy ¡ earldennison
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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
    Commented

    wtf 25 health it means a single attack from enemy and MC is done for what a loap hole seriously every other states are high but health is so low how he even survive and recovery is so high is he afread of broken bones than death seriously this makes me drop the novel even before 80+ chapter and is MC a godly being because he can literally clear all dungeon in Japan so he can save world like nothing happens in just four years others also become that powerful than what's the point of doomsday and country are doing same as old way so what MC going to do after became that op he doesn't even consider places or situation because he can kill 100 Mecladones so he has no rival I like tha island part at least he do something for survival and hard work but now new spell in one day that can kill dragons why no one ginuss find how to make spells in these four year in doomsday sure there are many people intelligent than MC in world isn't it please don't make a good plot country level fighting and if you don't know about other countries don't speak bullshitting about them because we know who are dectoers in history so stop stupid face slapping that's why I like fantasy novel than current world novel that includes countries it's so irritating to see author make there country good and other like demons from hell in doomsday are you serious world has been plundered by mutant creatures and country are fighting for became rulers seriously in just four years are humanity so selfish

    Ch 58 Chapter 57
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    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy ¡ ExSoldierLv99
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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
    Posted

    To be honest I read these novel to chapter 50 it's a good novel no doubt about it good background and easy to understand but the MC of the novel is perverted and the heram tag prove it in the novel you don't go for romantic them it's brutal world the stronger you are the more woman you get in starting the MC is mature but after few chapter he became to childish so that's it

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    TOP SECRET - Adventures in the Dark Continent
    Fantasy ¡ _chomps
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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
    Commented

    don't tell me they have computers also

    Ch 800 Visitor Requests
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    I'm the King Of Technology
    Fantasy ¡ lumydee
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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
    Commented

    I don't know anything about Engenaring but the novel makes me go and search about them on google to see how they able to build a freaking T.V in kingdom novel with out any way to build it in short term it's getting boaring with each chapter MC is like system slave and the system also like godfather giving him everything seriously please add OP MC or OP system Tag on these novel. there is no science now only op godly system disappointing how a good novel turn system slave novel

    Ch 799 New Home
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    I'm the King Of Technology
    Fantasy ¡ lumydee
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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
    Posted

    so good grammar that made me cry please improve it before posting it and the conversation between character is literally like mess not a single paragraph make sense who's talking to who

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    The Zombie Attack Begins
    Sci-fi ¡ DanielBR
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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
    Posted

    no way 🙅 this novel literally give you definition of lowest IQ mc ever I mean mc get married for just like that plus he gets legendary tier weapon but he sell like it was nothing what character building! MC didn't even kill a single mid tier monster seriously no joke the mc make me kill him for his stupidity dropped novel

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    Battle of Ascension
    Fantasy ¡ HotIce
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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
    Commented

    is it me or any one notice that the technology level in novel way quick I mean mc start from scratch and now he making WiFi , computer is system also offers engineering to every worker in his kingdom letraly way to quick for such level of development seriously WiFi computer, games who going to make motherboard, transistor and internet for it no offense but I also like the novel but they making it way to easily for mc to build he's kingdom how you explain them principles of science. Decreasing mature level of novel please stop it it is one of my favorite novel

    Ch 779 New Rules!
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    I'm the King Of Technology
    Fantasy ¡ lumydee
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  • Swapnil_Dhande
    Swapnil_Dhande3yr
    Posted

    why mc is so op? and system can also provide people out of things air? to simple story hmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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    The Sovereignty System
    Fantasy ¡ Termax
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