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Goodluck and Amen
First, Good Job, the start of the story eas not so wonderful but I love how you develop your story from being just a genius to a Experienced one through travelling, I would love to see his journey bug second point, his house, the way you manipulated the scene and chooses hufflepuff for their loyalty and also investing for future follower and Last his goal and execution of it starting from the bottom, befriending the minister, the threat to rita, to speaking with Gandalf with elegance and for showing his stance. Good Job And thank you
Mercy Of Heaven : Heavenly Gate
Sorrow of the Heaven : Heavenly Rain
My condolences, take your time and stay healthy for yourself and us
God a lot to improve but I am still reading and hoping for a better chaoter but keep up and improve the piece and thanks for updating[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Thanks for the chapter
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