Review Detail of 0Creator0CZEOS in Wizarding World: Malakai Malfoy

First, Good Job, the start of the story eas not so wonderful but I love how you develop your story from being just a genius to a Experienced one through travelling, I would love to see his journey bug second point, his house, the way you manipulated the scene and chooses hufflepuff for their loyalty and also investing for future follower and Last his goal and execution of it starting from the bottom, befriending the minister, the threat to rita, to speaking with Gandalf with elegance and for showing his stance. Good Job And thank you