No_Brains
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No_Brains3yrCommentedI hope nobody i know , knows im reading this
"Oh, God." She uttered when he slid a finger inside her slick entrance. She could feel her core stretched around his finger.- No_Brains3yrCommented
I think you can get rid of the to from the “We’re going to outside” part
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Ignore the period lol
But when I heard her answer I was shocked.Although I was the one who was blaming her since the beginning I was surprised when she accepted it .But then suddenly her eyes changed and she told me that both of us had somehow hurt each other and were not guilty about it therefore we are even and that both of us owe nothing to each other .After that asked she me to ignore her and that she would do the same with me.Then she walked away. - No_Brains3yrCommented
The last sentence, “After that she asked me to ignore her.”
But when I heard her answer I was shocked.Although I was the one who was blaming her since the beginning I was surprised when she accepted it .But then suddenly her eyes changed and she told me that both of us had somehow hurt each other and were not guilty about it therefore we are even and that both of us owe nothing to each other .After that asked she me to ignore her and that she would do the same with me.Then she walked away. - No_Brains3yrCommented
Would male leads be a better choice than main leads or maybe ive been thinking too much about it? I dont know anymore XD. This is why my user is No brains
Eugene Callisto is not supposed to be here.According to the novel he had gone on a royal expedition as an envoy of the Arevacii Empire and he is not supposed to be here .In the novel he returns one month after Odette's birthday and meets Mary at the National Academy and then falls for her.Why is this dude here.This is very bad very very very bad.He is one of the main leads and him being here will greatly impact the original story line. Therefore he is another person I must avoid at all costs.I was thinking about all of these matters that I didn't even realize that odette had come.When I looked at Odette i saw her smiling at me then her eyes looked at the person beside her brother and then she blushed.I looked at her blushing face and then looked at Mary's who was going to be the reason for her heartbreak later. - No_Brains3yrReplied to tenwang
I’ll review once I read the 18 chapters you have posted and then I’ll give you my thoughts. I barely review so I wont be able to express myself or give my opinion as well as other reviewers do, BUT i’ll try my best to improve my skills so I can give you a proper review. While im at it I should improve my memory as well haha.
Ch 1 YAY I Died - No_Brains3yrCommented
He gotta have the shinies in his room to flex
I walked in. Kaelean's room was double the size of my room and it was beautiful with the right amount of furniture and flashiness.It was truly a mirror of what a room of a royal should look like.While i was admiring the room's interior design i saw a tall and broad figure near the window with his back towards me . - No_Brains3yrCommented
She is brutal but i like it XD
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Oh? The crown prince is probably doing the stalking if I remember correctly his eyes are red.
Only if I knew a pair of red eyes had been looking at me when i was with odette. - No_Brains3yrCommented
Mm interesting
Young Lord? Why was this maid calling her 'lord' when she's clearly a girl? She has no doubt about that because she also checked that part down there. Wait- did that maid just spoke in English? And in a British accent to boot. But before she could ask anything, the maid spoke again. - No_Brains3yrCommented
Oh? A threatening please I see how about we punch you instead
"Please, come quietly with us, Doctor," he said in a deep voice full of authority. He said 'please', but his tone definitely would not allow any kind of refusal. - No_Brains3yrCommentedCh 195 NOTICE: WITHHOLDING FOR FINALS
- No_Brains3yrReplied to GuYuenanaCh 195 NOTICE: WITHHOLDING FOR FINALS
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Mm
Prologue - No_Brains3yrCommented
Mm
THE DEATH OF A MOVIE EMPEROR