I really enjoyed the way you portrayed the MC in your book as a young boy who had no reason to live until he died, The fact that he felt like an outcast in his own family made me feel sympathetic for the boy, The writing creates an image for me what it's like as I just stand there in every scene and seeing what it's like through the boys eyes. I enjoyed reading it and looking forward to future updates, well done and keep up the work.

I cant believe its finished I loved the book it was amazing and Full of excitment, I loved the characters, Well done on completeing you book

I LOVE IT, as soon as i started reading it I was engrossed into It, I can’t wait for a new chapter to come out, Keep going and good luck! :)

I'm writing out my new chapter it will be ready soon :)

Thank you

I’ve only just started reading this book and it made me chuckle a bit at the start but as i kept reading it made me attached to it I can’t stop its got the Scene thats painting a picture in my head. The book has great potential,Keep going 👍👍

I’ve just started reading this book, Im engaged in the book It paints a picture in my head as I read along the chapters. Overall i think its a great book, Keep going 👍

I’ve only just started reading this book and Im engrossed Im the book, It’s got action which I Iove and romance It’s a great combination. Keep going👍👍

I have many ideas running through my head about this book and I do agree that hopefully it will have a future I like how you shared your ideas with me and how it will peak interest in reading it I will be adding action into the book soon. thank you

I’ve just started reading This books and im already addicted. I’ve never liked fantasy books but this has convinced me to read many more, The descriptive writing intrigued me to read More chapters