Review Detail of Booksnovelx123 in The Architect of Balance

I really enjoyed the way you portrayed the MC in your book as a young boy who had no reason to live until he died, The fact that he felt like an outcast in his own family made me feel sympathetic for the boy, The writing creates an image for me what it's like as I just stand there in every scene and seeing what it's like through the boys eyes. I enjoyed reading it and looking forward to future updates, well done and keep up the work.