Review Detail of Eliza_Prince17 in Mafia’s call

I haven't had much to read yet, but it is enough to realize that it is very good and that it can have a great future, well ... if you want to tell me how to make the story interesting: try to portray stronger feelings like anger at the betrayal of someone close which triggers a thirst for revenge for the character and the sadness of a great loss and add more details since it is a book for action add a car chase, a shootout between mafias, high-class technologies and etc. watch the Fast and Furious movies, I'm sure you'll be inspired. Good luck and whatever happens never stop writing if that's what you like, don't make the same mistake as many writers that happened.