IT'S BACK!!!!!! LET'S FRIGGING GOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!

To be completely honest, the grammar is quite messy. Although its still readable, there are some parts that are unnecessary so u should work on that. This is easily improved by time so its not a big deal. Story wise, it's decent and interesting. Overall, just continue writing and writing cuz "repetition is the mother of learning".

Shura's Wrath ripoff HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAJAJAJAJAJAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAJAJAJAJAJAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAJAJAJAJAJAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAJAJAJAJAJAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAJAJAJAJAJAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAJAJAJAJAJAHAHAHAHAH

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Guys what happened why isn't author-san not updating anymore??!????????????????????????????????????????!????????????????????????????????????????!????????????????????????????????????????!????????????????????????????????????????!????????????????????????????????????????!????????????????????????????????????????!???????????????????????????????????????

Where's the rest of it?! 200 something chaps to go!

Plzz where is the discord server invite

Guys where's the link to the discord server!?

idk man I'm @ 4 chaps and the damsel in distress trope is here already -_- will the story get better afterwards? ch4 is such a turn off for me

well written and interesting concept. i like that the mc didn't became overpowered overnight but gained his skills and abilities because of hard work and experience.