Review Detail of Mepha in GOT: Ice Dragon of the North

Not bad, though naive in places, but for a novice author who's mostly interested in Marvel and Anime, that's commendable. Welcome to harsh reality, that's how I'd like to greet all authors of fanfiction on anime and other garbage. (And those authors who thwarted anime and GOT... a separate cauldron in hell awaits them!) Anyway, back on topic, the ff has potential, but I would advise the author to write while he can, and after the inspiration is gone, start editing his work. Take out the anime, then - there's the naivete of being a 5 year old super genius, sword master, and so on. Dig into the GOT wiki lore a bit, but don't get carried away, it's purely to avoid logical holes in the story. Well, start a new book, already with a mature version of the protagonist, more serious, and a little - a little depth for the atmosphere. A more severe version of the protagonist, you can emphasize bad childhood, more battles, training warriors, taking over Skagos, becoming a Chieftain. You can add a local floki (you watched the Vikings, right?), which will help build a drakkar, with these drakkars can go loot all in a row, from the pirates to the land of the blog. You can arrange a mini-conflict with the North of - for MC raids, the Starks are still strong). In general, the peace agreement with the Starks, construction in Skagos, the opening of a new trade route to Essos, you can do whaling. You can drop in on the Wildlings, recruit them, and there's a zombie encounter, you get the idea). Conflicts, Wars, intrigue, kingdom building, and so on and so forth! That is - the potential is huge, you can write a chic fanfic, about a brutal savage pirate. And so I wish the author good luck, and I hope he doesn't go back to Comics and Anime again.