this is a really good book I like the pace and it keeps getting better please keep updating This Is A Good Book And Not Many Have written A story and the Dovah

I like the story but the author can't keep the amount of health consistent it went from 150k+ to 15k or from 300k to 30k I can't tell which is which anymore its almost like he is not immersed enough to pay attention to his own details but overall a good story

your writing is awesome just take my words with a grain of salt it's your story and I love the way its coming along I love the way your building up the romance

the story is great I just feel like the MC is an idiot he keeps falling for the same thing like things covering his face but doesn't call the slime or takes a beating when he doesn't have to by withholding his transformation..... But other wise good job Author

I'd give more stars but the updating on this is too long 😩 😫 😪 I hope the author can post more of this story it is really good. keep up the good work author

you can't end it like that wth 😤 right at a love confession tsk tsk tsk bad Author

where is the link for what they did to Issei

Authur I love this book but I think that you should add clementina to the relationship..... by her proving her love by almost dying by protecting Noah or something just a thought Author

I just love the bond William has with mama ella keep it going this is fantastic this is an amazing story where mama ella is a good judge of character like a real mother

for all the haters that can't participate gold when you see it screw you i think the character development was amazing it made your chest wanna drop through some of it. remember haters if all your going to do Is give hateful opinions keep it to yourself.

omg the way writ this is amazing the way you worded it made me sound smart lol 😆

this is an amazing book please keep it up please continue it please

amazing book please continue this has a really good buildup so far and he didn't start off op simply an amazing book that is well thought out.

please continue this this is amazing omg

amazing this book is just amazing keep up the good work author

so do you update once a week on this app??? I love this its amazing the best skyrim novel I've ever read.

this book is so well put together its hard to put it down i couldn't stop myself the story was amazing the characters were nice and it never gets dull ive read it 3 times already up to this point

The author did such an amazing job with describing everything and made new characters fit right on totally made it to where you couldn't put the book down.