the story is great I just feel like the MC is an idiot he keeps falling for the same thing like things covering his face but doesn't call the slime or takes a beating when he doesn't have to by withholding his transformation..... But other wise good job Author
Diyen_Pi
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LIKEAmadeo_Trevino:your writing is awesome just take my words with a grain of salt it's your story and I love the way its coming along I love the way your building up the romance