Review Detail of Amadeo_Trevino in I Received System to Become Dragonborn

Item: I Received System to Become Dragonborn
Rating: 5

Review detail

Amadeo_TrevinoLv131yrAmadeo_Trevino

the story is great I just feel like the MC is an idiot he keeps falling for the same thing like things covering his face but doesn't call the slime or takes a beating when he doesn't have to by withholding his transformation..... But other wise good job Author

I Received System to Become Dragonborn

Diyen_Pi

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Diyen_PiAuthorDiyen_Pi

Thanks for your review. I appreciate it. This story still have many flaws. But I will try to improve it. I'm glad you enjoying this. :)

1yr

Amadeo_TrevinoLv13Amadeo_Trevino

your writing is awesome just take my words with a grain of salt it's your story and I love the way its coming along I love the way your building up the romance

1yr

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11mth

Ethan_HanleyLv14Ethan_Hanley

i agree

Amadeo_Trevino:your writing is awesome just take my words with a grain of salt it's your story and I love the way its coming along I love the way your building up the romance

1mth