5 out of 5. The story is really good, and I like all the characters and the entire flow of it all. It is also really nice to see an actually good and smart main character. Most plot charters are just bumbling dumasses…
example: "Xx sits in the back seat, folds his arms, looking out the window, imagining something". "or xx swinging his sword with all his might from top to bottom so that it causes wind pressure that makes the tree in front of it split open", well something like that.
A Guide to Kingdom Building ( Me Reincarnated 365 x)
its been changed a lot, like many typo, fixing grammar here and there, adding more word to make sense, giving punctuation to help the reader read, please read it and compare it with your original or raw version