Hi, I like your novel, keep enthusiastic about updating your novel, and also make more detailed words from your novel, that's all my advice, thank you
MoeJam90
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LIKEexample: "Xx sits in the back seat, folds his arms, looking out the window, imagining something". "or xx swinging his sword with all his might from top to bottom so that it causes wind pressure that makes the tree in front of it split open", well something like that.
MoeJam90:By the way, can you give me some examples of this? So, I can keep it in mind when writing future chapters?