Candie_Lovejoy

Excellent story that came full circle. The characters are unique. The unexpected plot twist with the villain was a good touch.

I really loved this story. The characters and the storyline were excellent and well developed. I enjoyed the relationship between the main characters the most. The only thing that I would recommend is to have someone proofread the chapters. The grammar and spelling were often times frustrating and would take away from enjoying the story fully.

I did love the characters. The world of Thana was interesting and it was described so beautifully that I wished I could visit. The end was slightly abrupt. I wish they would have shown that the others were all safe.

Revealed

The story is short but the characters are very likeable. The author took liberaties with the time frame of the story but she announced it in advance so no harm done.

Great story. Mateo and Serena are wonderful characters and they surrounded by well Thought out secondary characters. Several different story lines but they are all fun to follow.

An enjoyable read from start To finish. The characters really stayed true to themselves even if they had some missteps…. Thanks for the amazing story.

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Intriguing story where so far the bad boy is truly the bad boy. I keep waiting for him to show some remorse but so far, he truly is a monster.

The story was fun and I really liked all the characters. I think theRe could have been more follow up with what happened to Jack. The story really could have done with some proof reading.