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thanks for the feedback ! i will try to tone it down on the descriptions and should trust the reader more!
the plan for the novel is to be a serious slow burner thanks for the feedback! i will add a short basic description of his looks somewhere in the first few chapters
thanks for the feedback!
sir ! I'll upload one more tomorrow
thanks for pointing this out! i will try to fix that.. my writing is still evolving! i will try to keep that in mind!
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thank you for giving me more ideas to flesh out! I will keep that in mind for the coming chapters and maybe redo some older ones !
if you have caught up with the chapters please give me some feedback! I'm in desperate need for feedback! what did you like? what you didn't like? was the style its written to your liking ?