The story so far is good but the English is pretty bad. You are using "he" to design female characters wrongly. it gets very confusing. Maybe you should write in your native language and use google translate?

I think my English is pretty good, at least good enough to work in a an English speaking country. It is just that the way you write in English is weird. The sentences don't flow, neither does the logic etc. It is pretty hard to follow. It may just need an editor for smoother transitions.

Ok. My bad when I stopped reading there wasn't any other chapter but I see on the next one he met the healer. In the end I gave up on the story, the English is making it hard for me to understand what is going on. The story seems interesting but I get confused too much reading it. I stopped at the first arena battle when he asked the old lady to go get stuff for saving her grandson. Good luck author.

it is life couple break up. Even more so if you got with the person in your teens or twenties because your personality isn't formed and you don't know what you want. We all grow and sometimes the person we are with either doesn't grow with us or just changes too.

ahaha. And your name is villain...not much of a villain!

Very good book currently at chap 7. Not sure how the story will unfold. I noticed the characters were waiting for the military to help them lol....In a carribean country? That's unlikely unless they have someone who has connections among them. So far so good, I guess the main things that can make the novel go sideways are the future interactions with the new team members (Amelia's boyfriend seems already like a future headache), how they get off the island, they find their families in the US and also kennen will most likely have to go to china to find his family. I guess all these elements can be future arcs of the storyline. Honestly the level of writing is pretty good except for some typo here and there but nothing major!! Also, I love that the "system" isn't prominent as in other novel. At this point it may have even been better if there was no system as it is not really giving them any advantage and it would make the novel more realistic. The downsides is that they wouldn't know anything about their powers and the storylines would be longer to make them figure it out. Hopefully you don't become a system junkie author. Good luck. Please try to increase the frequency of updates.

So author, even though he will fall in love with 2 women, will he pick one? or are we having some kind of wish fulfillment where the 2 women are ok with sharing (cheating) their man ?

Love triangle isn't harem. Haven't you seen the vampire diaries, the battle of Troy? the story of the 3 kingdoms? as much as you may hate it. Love/feelings make the world go round not logic. We are not logical creatures. Just look at the Tudors and England with Anne Boolean.

Great read. But it seems it stopped ? Hopefully author picks it up again. Like the MC, smart, no pushover MC. Hopefully he finds a girl different from Cecilia

Just finished reading to 179 and so far this novel is amazing!! Quite a gem author. Very good job, so far it is not overly cliché and best of all free for now. I will keep diligently voting for you.

Author hopefully you are good enough to pull up some complexe love triangles/rivals etc. with interesting plots mixed in.

Author, Iove triangle are super hard to do!! But if done well it can be a masterpiece. Good luck! Hope you don't disappoint.

most likely the other one I think.

Author it is only chapter 198. You should find a way to build something here but try to incorporate a love triangle. It is Crete the most used trop on tv shows and drama but it works!! in keeping readers engaged and guessing who the lead will end up with. Like Harry Potter first girlfriend, last girlfriend, like the vampire diaries, etc. I feel like that is the next level in human relationship that most of the writers on this platform cannot master so they go the easy road and do harem instead of confronting the difficuties, confusion, doubts of love triangles. I feel like the way the lead is growing and maturing could be a good basis for that.

Just found the book. like the story , read until 41. The lead is likable, isn't getting crazy about a guy or girl stupidly. Emotional maturity seems ok of this lead. The main issue is the updates! I did not realize the author only publish one chapter a month before I started!!!

Will give this a try because it is not a harem book!! Thanks a lot. As a woman I can get myself to read these nonsense. Some men are really desperate to live their fantasies!!

Well now I am going to start reading the story...sorry but I usually like to read the comments section to figure out if a story is worth reading. Hope it won't turn too disappointing.

great story. starting out well. Please don't turn it into a harem nonsense . I mean a lot of girl can like the MC but he should just stick to one. Besides it makes it more interesting seeing jealous women turned down.

Thanks author . I like it when relationships are like in real life. you try with different people you think it may work out even if in the end It doesn't and you find that one person who has your back in poor or rich and with who you will build something. I feel like most of these authors have never been in a healthy relationship where the girl is no super beautiful and strangely enough only becomes interested in the guy because he is sooo OP. I mean anyone knows it is not true love. if they wouldn't have given you the time of the day when you were a looser than the MC shouldn't entertain them when he succeeds either. After all just look at Warren buffet wife.

@ChuYang Hello i just read the chapter where you were explaining about going on an hiatus. I hope you are feeling better. Thanks for the explanations, i was a little confused as to why the author wanted to save people so much, why he had a hero complex etc. And i realize that the root cause is deeper than i thought. I feel from reading the book and your explanation is that you are someone that loves too much, that care too much etc. YOU ARE NOT SUPERMAN. It is not your job to fix others, the world etc. It is actually a little narcissitic to think you have the obligation to save your family. There is that book called "Women who love too much" that illustrate abused women and the psychology behind it. And your character and you love too much. You can lead a horse to the water but not make him drink. Even jesus wasn't loved by everyone, even hated. Not even considered by is own family but more respected by outsiders. The only thing you can do is be there when your loved ones need help, to lead by example. Just remember that you are loved.