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"Would you make a deal with a Soul for power and glory? To become the best? The Supreme? But with huge consequences and struggle? After knowing that death is all the time behind you or that no one will remember of you after you succeed? After knowing what terrible things awaits you, would accept the offer?" "One day Altars with strange stones in it appeared all around the world. After humans realized the roles of these stones, people with unique powers started to appear one after another and the world started to change in a rapid pace. To make it worse dimension zones appeared out of nowhere on different points of earth with creatures like demons, evils, fairys, spirits, sacred animals or monsters in it. Slaying these creatures humans started to gain bigger and bigger power until Godhood and Immortality was not a dream anymore. However as time went by, strangly, no one could become a god nor an immortal..."

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I don't really know what to say. The way you put everything is just what I like in a story like this. The back story of the main equipment of the mc, mc being someone who is despiced by others, and giving your readers as much knowledge that they can think of a flow but will not be able to stop reading. I will say you are great at what you do.
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Currently stopping at chapter 8. Will try to update review later. So, the MC's name is Greg. Only Greg? I'm fine with the 'soulstone' concept but what if, something like dropping his soulstone or getting stolen. Could someone else use his power? I think you could create something like putting back the soulstone into your body... something like that? Carrying a stone when you go everywhere is a bit... Also, by six elements --> what elements are they?
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I really like this story. The beginning immediately had me hooked. The characters are really interesting and the world is filled with mystery, at least for me. The only problem I have is the way how some sentences are phrased. I was confused at times, but I still enjoyed the story. Keep up thy holy work!
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Future_M_Animator
Future_M_AnimatorLv2Future_M_Animator

I really like this story. The beginning immediately had me hooked. The characters are really interesting and the world is filled with mystery, at least for me. The only problem I have is the way how some sentences are phrased. I was confused at times, but I still enjoyed the story. Keep up thy holy work!

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I don't really know what to say. The way you put everything is just what I like in a story like this. The back story of the main equipment of the mc, mc being someone who is despiced by others, and giving your readers as much knowledge that they can think of a flow but will not be able to stop reading. I will say you are great at what you do.

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Currently stopping at chapter 8. Will try to update review later. So, the MC's name is Greg. Only Greg? I'm fine with the 'soulstone' concept but what if, something like dropping his soulstone or getting stolen. Could someone else use his power? I think you could create something like putting back the soulstone into your body... something like that? Carrying a stone when you go everywhere is a bit... Also, by six elements --> what elements are they?

Scarlett_heartt
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It's really interesting plot. The characters are really cool. The plot is really moving fast and getting interesting...Your writting is really good...The choices of words and grammar is really great. This story has a lot of potential... Great going Author

pelzy
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OOh! The description grabbed me. It made me excited just thinking about what was to come. I really like how well put it is. This book had potential and I wish you good luck.

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The plot is fast, interesting, and the first chapter just charmed me~ There are only minor mistakes in grammar, so I have no complaints. Characters are likable, especially Greg. I just imagine him being an excited puppy when he sees his guardian change forms~ Thanks for the read and keep it up! We want more world-building too!

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This story has a load of potential. I love the story a lot. The Starting hooked me a lot. Author keep up the good work.

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RJMidnight
RJMidnightLv2RJMidnight

It is only four chapters, you cannot tell much from, but at this point, you are doing a good job. Your synopsis was good and got me interested and you storytell well. I like your writing style, it is nice. You set up a god worldbuilding, showing us a new world and hiw things are done there. The only problem is the bit of grammar mistakes. If you look back and reread your story, you can catch the mistakes. Keep up the good work!

Readoholic
ReadoholicLv4Readoholic

Consider this as an early review to show support to the dear author. Its just 3 chapters yet but the writing style is wonderful and the grammar is perfect as well. The author has created an interesting world and characters. This is the type of story where once you read it, you will look forward to every chapter. At the moment I rate it as 4./5. Waiting for the story to unfold.

Shadowmonarch
ShadowmonarchLv2Shadowmonarch

Great story and world with nice characters! The Author has a great description about the conversations and in the beginning with the fighting scenes. It has really good potential so keep up!

HKGI
HKGILv2HKGI

I like, just like the other one! I hope it will continue more and the Author won't stop the writing, because it has great potential. Good Job!

UnFallen
UnFallenLv2UnFallen

It has a really good flow and English vocabulary. It has a hooking feeling that makes reader's like to read more, but because there is only 3 chaps I can say only this. Put up the good work!

deepu_
deepu_Lv6deepu_

the story development is so good and the vocabulary is very nice...prologue is explained clearly... Looking for more updates... keep up the good work author

Avidfan
AvidfanLv3Avidfan

The story and english really flows very well. The start is pretty good and the beginning story arc we are already introduced to the world and the guardians. Is the MC guardian/ stone unique? It can shape change it seems. The title of the story is a Y instead of a J. Is it intentionally?

GloriouslyFamous
GloriouslyFamousLv3GloriouslyFamous

A very interesting story, The story had a very intriguing prologue and is written well. The character of the MC and other side characters are described well. There are minor grammatical errors, but nothing that will prevent you from the smooth experience of a great read. The world seems very interesting, and there is definitely a hook factor. As there are only 3 chapters so far, I can not comment on the other aspects, but it has got great potential. Well done!

Sif_Dazai
Sif_DazaiLv1Sif_Dazai

Hi, I like your novel, keep enthusiastic about updating your novel, and also make more detailed words from your novel, that's all my advice, thank you

Kirbyisgreen
KirbyisgreenLv4Kirbyisgreen

Interesting idea for a novel. Good start, keeping on writing and improving your craft. My suggestion is that the MC feels a little flat at a glance, perhaps give him a bit more personality or motivation. Otherwise, keep at it my friend.

Gery_
Gery_AuthorGery_

Just because I need one more review I will do mine. I hope its not a problem. And of course thanks to everyone who read my book and made a review.:)

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