As I left a comment in the chapter before about the problem, I will not go into much detail about this. But to put it most simply, your character writing is not good, if not straight-up bad. To put it in a single sentence, this story is as wide an ocean and deep as a puddle, possibly even less. I have read seven chapters so far. The actual positive that I have is that the ideas are very interesting, which may be the only thing I have positive about this story. This novel's real problem is character writing, which is one of my biggest problems. The world itself is interesting enough for me to continue to read. However, the thing that is holding it back is the character that is very much lack in personality or anything in general. It becomes a dull read quickly due to how the character interacts and talks; there is some hint in character, but calling it a hint would be too generous. A character learns that our MC has the power to create life, and all of his reaction is boiled down to "wow, that's cool" that is possibly the worst reaction you could have; you can have so much when the character is put in that kind of situation, but you seem to underused it too much. When the MC have the power to possibly do anything, create anything, or make anything that he wants, there is also so much potential there, but no, there is nothing. When the woman said he should create humans, he followed her order and did not even try to do something else. Doesn't he want to create something else? Doesn't he want to make something else that is not the world itself? Why should he even follow her in the first place? Not only that, but what is the goal of this story? What is the point of this story? You, as the writer, why do you want to make this story? What is the story that you are trying to tell here? A good idea and concept are not enough to carry a story, so you must do more. Like I said before, writing is king; no matter how awesome and cool your plot and the world are, I might as well drop this novel if the characters have no charm. If the novel continues like this, I might as well read fanfiction because they have very distinct characters, at least in those stories.

Now that is something I want to see!!

As to continue from my comment from above. The character is bland, very bland. As I said, the MC is generic, if not straight-up bad; the story is, to put it simply, very dull due to how the character interacts or says. Not to mention the other two characters that are blander than the cardboard box itself. An excellent example of character writing, when it comes to character introduction, would be the introduction of Arbiter in Halo 2; it takes less than 5 minutes to open. Still, I learned so much about the character and the world itself. Another good example would be the introduction of Natasha, aka Black Widow, in the first Avenger movie. You can go and watch it and see what I mean. There is no charm in this story that makes me want to read more, except for maybe the plot, but that doesn't mean anything when the character is boring, and it makes me not want to read more of it. I want good character writing that would like me to read more, which is very lacking in the story. So, I hope you can improve on that.

While I love to leave a review, I don't think I can do it due to how early in the story we are, but I can still give you some criticism. The plot is fascinating; I had not seen a story like this, but at the same time, it can get really boring due to how repetitive it can be, as the chapters so far is nothing more than the MC creating thing while it was interesting at first it can get really dull quite if all he did is make things. This might not seem fair considering this very early in the story, but with story ideas like that, I can see massive potential in the plot itself, so I understand why the MC need to learn how to create life and the world itself. But my most significant criticism of this story so far is the character writing or the lack thereof. Character writing is king when it comes to a story. You could have a bad plot but a good character, and I would still consider the story good. The character here, however, is very bland, with no personality except for surface-level stuff. That is me being generous, but that is still not good enough because that still doesn't stop them from being anything more than cardboard. You could say it is still early in the story, and you have no time to establish character, but I would say you might be wrong. A 1000 words chapter can quickly establish your characters; anything that character does or does not do, said or not said, can contribute to creating a character. The MC is so generic that it is insulting; there is nothing I can tell about the MC due to how empty he is. The questions he asks and the thing that he doesn't give me any hint about the MC's personality, except for maybe that soul-devouring question, but that is not good enough. I understand that the MC is like a reader stand-in so that we would understand and would ask the fundamental question that we have; however, a reader stand-in is not good enough, he should be asking all sorts of questions when he was chosen as Keeper, but he does not. He should not have this blank personality considering he is a soul that lived before, so he shouts have some character or trait, but he does not. Good character writing should move the plot along while informing us what kind of characters there are or giving us a hint about the said character's personality or trait. There is more I wanted to say, but I will continue this with a reply to this comment so you can read on that.

That seems a bit weird. He learned about a person who can create life, but his reaction was shock, nothing more than that, and he suddenly started giving him advice for no reason. Maybe this is just me nitpicking, but if someone suddenly creates life in front of you, that would be a shocking revelation that can make you start questioning existence. I guess I'm trying to say that his reaction seems very tame for someone in this situation.

That's quite a jump in question there; devour soul? Is this... foreshadowing?

A nice story so far. It's not too complicated of a story; it's a lovely light read, and with the story's tone so far, it's a good mood fixer looking forward to more.

Maybe...? I mean, there is already a plan for romance, but harem is still something I am debating on.

So, shameless author review here. A novel idea that had been stuck in my head for a long while. I finally decided to write it; you could say it is my passion project, and I want this to be successful. I hope you all are going to enjoy the story.

well, I never thought how similar it is to code geass. Also, this one is Lambda, which is the best out trio and you cannot convince me otherwise.

What a great deduction! But you're still wrong anyway; I'm Buddhist. Seriously, just because I'm focusing on one figure makes me Christian? I guess you learn something new every day.

Thank you? Sorry? I don't know how to respond to that.

Well, it's going to be a massive arc for a reason.

Not just any Annihilus, this is Annihilus with half of the Phoenix Force

For romance, I do have a plan for it in the far future. It won't be the main focus, but it will undoubtedly be there. It won't be a harem, and I certainly don't plan to make it so. My only problem is that I still haven't decided who the love interest should be. I have someone in mind, but this someone might and can change in the future.

So here is an obligatory Author review of his book. You can ask me anything you want by replying to this review, but don't expect me to answer it immediately.

He will create an organisation alright, but it will not be port mafia. I was thinking about something more... holy, like an angel... but focusing more on death... like decay... hmmm.🤔🤔🤔

thank you for the advice :)

ah yes, three knock off Egyptian gods card.

i'm not sure with this one but im pretty sure the qorld range is actually 2 meters