Review Detail of Galatea1o1 in Keepers of Every Universe

As I left a comment in the chapter before about the problem, I will not go into much detail about this. But to put it most simply, your character writing is not good, if not straight-up bad. To put it in a single sentence, this story is as wide an ocean and deep as a puddle, possibly even less. I have read seven chapters so far. The actual positive that I have is that the ideas are very interesting, which may be the only thing I have positive about this story. This novel's real problem is character writing, which is one of my biggest problems. The world itself is interesting enough for me to continue to read. However, the thing that is holding it back is the character that is very much lack in personality or anything in general. It becomes a dull read quickly due to how the character interacts and talks; there is some hint in character, but calling it a hint would be too generous. A character learns that our MC has the power to create life, and all of his reaction is boiled down to "wow, that's cool" that is possibly the worst reaction you could have; you can have so much when the character is put in that kind of situation, but you seem to underused it too much. When the MC have the power to possibly do anything, create anything, or make anything that he wants, there is also so much potential there, but no, there is nothing. When the woman said he should create humans, he followed her order and did not even try to do something else. Doesn't he want to create something else? Doesn't he want to make something else that is not the world itself? Why should he even follow her in the first place? Not only that, but what is the goal of this story? What is the point of this story? You, as the writer, why do you want to make this story? What is the story that you are trying to tell here? A good idea and concept are not enough to carry a story, so you must do more. Like I said before, writing is king; no matter how awesome and cool your plot and the world are, I might as well drop this novel if the characters have no charm. If the novel continues like this, I might as well read fanfiction because they have very distinct characters, at least in those stories.