Tamash1
I'm a lazy, realistic, dirty minded, Fan-fic Story lover. Most of the time I'm reading. If not, then I play with my pets, listen to music, draw, watch anime, or sleep.
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Damn this book is fucking amazing! I just found it today and binge read it, so now I'm all caught up I guess. Though when I checked the latest update, it said that it was two months ago. I have small hope, but please continue to update! I really mean it when I say that this book has a bright future!
I'm fine with somewhat long fights, but I think it will be better if you just capture the most important parts of the fight like the beginning, middle, and end.
For me, I would say for him to go alone. You can still add a love interest, I'm fine with it since there's more drama, just don't take all the focus away from the main and change his personality. If you want to read my rant, here's the option to do so lol 👇 I don't really know if your different or not, but I find a lot of stories where the author all of the sudden adds a new character into the mix with the main one, and then they get all the attention and the mains ignored. You probably won't do that, but another thing I'm wary about is that when female characters are added, authors like making the main male be whipped by them. Meaning the male will give everything up to the female with no pride, and will always listen to what she wants. It gets annoying.
No, you shouldn't change any chapters. It both shows how much better your getting at writing with each passing one. To me, this book is just amazing. Plus, if you do change some chapters, a bunch of us who keep track will have to re-read them. Well, that's just the lazy in me talking 😅