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some partial fault also lies in MC as he keeps "courting death" everywhere and doesn't even think that his actions could implicate his clan as well....he keeps on boasting of living at the peak and seeing the whole world in his previous life but doesn't know the fact that people get revenge by first killing the clan and the people you love...alot of people died because of his actions against cheng clan.... he literally wasted all the experience he gained in his previous life imo... 🤦♂️
keep it up author 👍💯. my second review so not gonna write anything. only completing the word count. but honestly i like your work vey much and thats why wanted to give you another 5 stars. the only thing that saddens me is the slow update. atleast update 1 chapter per day. thats all i ask of you... best of luck😊
ughhh!!!!! why the hell did he do that ffs? even if he wanted to duel, he should have used only one element but no, he had to show off.. now every enemy of his will become alert and all those who bullied him will also be on alert and try to eliminate him even before he grow strong.... such a stupid move.... thats why i hate these revenge stories..... when MC gets his power and even at the lowest of power ranks, starts showing off.... bull-shit....
bro now the good part is starting... keep up your best work... don't let all this build up and personality growth go down the drain now that the MC has got magic... i don't want to watch a stupid MC who will go on announcing to people that i have got magic now and i will take revenge... i want him to understand his powers a little and become a little more strong before attacking his enemies....also let him keep his secrets to himself and not even tell to his sister or the other girl... overall hope his character/personality remains best and dont become retard by time....
bro start doing something already.... its been a while and all our MC is doing is lazing around... not trying to do anything at all except for cursing his condition and enemies.... he can search in libraries for possible methods to be able to use magic for his case... if not he can atleast inspect the pendant.... everyone can guess that at last moments of his mother's life, she gave him the pendant like it is something important.... but he has not checked it even once.... slow start doesn't mean you start lazing around.... the novel is currently going like a slice of life novel with nothing interesting.....
yeah i was about to ask him the same... he seems quite smart to me... he's not doing anything stupid even though his classmates taunt him everyday... we can also see he forbade his sister from getting involved into his current messy situation at the academy....
he just wanted to give him a general overview of the world and powerhouses as the kid was interested in using magic. he didn't tell him all that because he wanted him to become a mage the next day. he also mentioned that other children at his age "like those royals" had already started cultivating magic.. so no big deal telling him... also you can see he was sad because he found that the kid had no magic channels. at least he could do was tell him about those things so that he sholud be careful when he grows up.
please author say no to a beta, stupid, brainless and indecisive MC....no split personality shit... no shit logics like other r-18 author gives about weak to strong where their MC is a complete retard until the end. i have had enough of those MC's in most of r-18 on webnovel... please a descent and likable MC is all it is required for this novel to be the best. i hope you don't disappoint. best of luck 👍
the way author is rejecting any opinions about the story or MC's character, it seems he isn't writing this novel for readers but for his own personal satisfaction. dude if you don't want to write something the readers wish to see, then whats the purpose of even writing... i can't seem to understand...
i know it sounds bizarre for a 3-4 year old kid to do those kind of stuffs in our world but in MC's world every thing is in authors hand as it is his fantasy. what rules we have in our world doesn't apply in novel's world bro. keep your facts straight. why didn't you ask any author that why people are flying in their novels because in our world people don't fly? because it's a god damn novel and every thing is possible as author sees fit whether it's to someone's liking or not. so read it or leave it... thats simple...