Review Detail of Feanorw in Rise of Myriad Magic Emperor
Review detail
The first 5 chapters are just info dump explaining or justifying things. Author, I don’t care why you wrote the way you did, I'm willing to accept it. You just need to make it coherent in the story. I read up to half the chapter 02 (after the info dumps) and just couldn’t go on. The story is badly written, the MC is 3 years old but thinks and talks like a grown up, there is no proper setting or exposure... man, it just got hard to read. I wish the author good luck and a good writing experience, but this is not my cup of tea. Maybe if author san rewrites this someday.
Rise of Myriad Magic Emperor
Evernightlord
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i know it sounds bizarre for a 3-4 year old kid to do those kind of stuffs in our world but in MC's world every thing is in authors hand as it is his fantasy. what rules we have in our world doesn't apply in novel's world bro. keep your facts straight. why didn't you ask any author that why people are flying in their novels because in our world people don't fly? because it's a god damn novel and every thing is possible as author sees fit whether it's to someone's liking or not. so read it or leave it... thats simple...
When you read two chapters and justify your review. I don't know if I should expect it or not. What Kai did was just due to curiousity. As for the information on cultivation way. I just wanted readers to be clear about the cultivation way from the start and how Kai cultivation differ from it. Kai will never enter this this stage of magic apprentice in life. Like I said world building starts from chapter 9 or so on.
When you read two chapters and justify your review. I don't know if I should expect it or not. What Kai did was just due to curiousity. As for the information on cultivation way. I just wanted readers to be clear about the cultivation way from the start and how Kai cultivation differ from it. Kai will never enter this this stage of magic apprentice in life. Like I said world building starts from chapter 9 or so on.
Don't take it to the heart. I said I only read 2 chapters because that is true. Surely, this also means I might have not reached the "good part". But I need to justify my opinion based on what I have actually read, and I'm making this clear to everyone who reads my review, including you. Maybe this just means it is not the kind of story I like to read. Maybe it means you, as the author, have some things to work on. I might be right, I might be wrong. But be sure, I really want you to succeed, and I gave my review not to offend you, and not for you to justify your writing, but because I sincerely think you can write better. Again, my best regards, and good luck.
Evernightlord:When you read two chapters and justify your review. I don't know if I should expect it or not. What Kai did was just due to curiousity. As for the information on cultivation way. I just wanted readers to be clear about the cultivation way from the start and how Kai cultivation differ from it. Kai will never enter this this stage of magic apprentice in life. Like I said world building starts from chapter 9 or so on.
Shinogami:Wait a minute the first 5 chapter are info dumps but you only read up to half chapter 2 ........ did you skip some chapter to quickly check later chapter or ....
Dude, if you don’t understand what "suspension of disbelief" means, I'm not the one who is going to explain. Just believe me when I say you can only stretch the fantasy so far (the exact point is different for everyone, I will give you that). As for "the author writes what he wants", this isn’t wrong, but is not right either, or else there would be no review section. If you like it, you can read it. I'm not stopping you. But I surelly expect that my review will: 1 - help the author to write better; 2 - help people that think like me to better choose how to spend their time. Happy reading!
LustDemon:i know it sounds bizarre for a 3-4 year old kid to do those kind of stuffs in our world but in MC's world every thing is in authors hand as it is his fantasy. what rules we have in our world doesn't apply in novel's world bro. keep your facts straight. why didn't you ask any author that why people are flying in their novels because in our world people don't fly? because it's a god damn novel and every thing is possible as author sees fit whether it's to someone's liking or not. so read it or leave it... thats simple...