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Echo_Fox5dReplied to Ringardmaybe Severance dragon?
"Greetings, I am Isaiah. The Leader of Nexus. Some of you may know me as the Demonic Blade Dragon." (Honestly he needs a better Title)- Echo_Fox29dPosted
My biggest issue with this story is how the author uses too much detail for every little thing. I don’t need to know how the desks are arranged in a room, I don’t need to know about the posters on the wall of a classroom, And I don’t need to know that the chairs in the classroom are comfortable, unless the character outright states it when he sits on it. There are more examples of this throughout the 11 chapters that I read.
- Echo_Fox30dReplied to Dummydumdum1Fire...my only weakness at this point.
- Echo_Fox1mthReplied to OtakuReverence"Your heart... is Mine! Gáe Bolg!" he shouted, using his Noble Phantasm as he rushed forwards, his spear finding its mark as he stabbed Shisui through the heart again.
- Echo_Fox1mthCommented"Yeah, Yeah. Now, I said get to work." I say, pulling her down as I do, if she was ready I would have never been able to move her, but with her attention divided, my pull forces her to drop completely, her tight pussy enveloping my shaft entirely, she lets out a surprised gasp as she does, before she glares at me again, jokes on her, it's just making me harder.
- Echo_Fox1mthReplied to kokishorttail(Ellie) - "I knew it! You aren't that bad of a dragon. If you look past all of the rumors, you are pretty cute for a dragon!"
- Echo_Fox1mthReplied to MGSR_SamThe next three matches were some of the most boring fights I've ever seen. Sakura vs. Ino was more entertaining than these bums.
- Echo_Fox1mthCommented"Is it really necessary that you take the lead?" She smirked.
- Echo_Fox1mthPosted
The premise is pretty good, but the author quickly ruins it with forced romance between a character. The main character doesn’t even like not truly at least, and the fact that he blinds himself before he even has access to his system, which is essentially suicide in the world he is in. Just because he blinded himself, doesn’t mean he’d be free from his familys influence they would still have to castrate him if he even wanted to be free from them. He simply gets too strong entirely too fast. Him going from slightly emotional to emotionless to very emotional back to emotionless on the drop of a hat gets rather annoying. The romance makes no sense because he is like the worst possible partner you could think of he’s not emotionally available he doesn’t even act like he likes you the only thing he has going from is that he’s strong and somewhat attractive that’s not mentioning how the author doesn’t even show how the romance develops between his love interests and him. He outright kills the son of a demigod permanently as in soul death. He never actually faces consequences for his actions, the most he ever does is when he gets injured from attacking the Akatsuki.
- Echo_Fox1mthReplied to Exi_Nexi
That’s an understatement, not even mentioning how emotionally unavailable he is.
"It won't get destroyed, right?" thought Jiryoku. - Echo_Fox1mthReplied to DaoOfGay
Unless they are in to that.
"Now, I am more powerful. There is nothing bigger than a woman more powerful than men to shrink their dicks. At the start, they might say they are good with it, but in time, they will lose all their confidence and manhood." - Echo_Fox2mthReplied to FinnsRevenge
Or hear me out on this you can just keep your disgusting opinions to yourself, it’s fine wanting to hate what you wanna hate, but don’t go ruining someone else’s day just because you can’t stand someone loving another person, and to that point, I wouldn’t mind him being homophobic if he kept it to himself and didn’t project like a little bitch.
detailI'm A Little Extra, But Why Are The Villainesses So Obsessed With Me?!Others · ItsJustANightmare - Echo_Fox2mthCommented
*culprit.
"If we didn't know Harry's personality from the start, maybe even we would think he was the murderer." - Echo_Fox2mthReplied to Typhon15
I think he ment turn her in to his queen.
Thanks to her Queen Piece she had the Speed of a Knight, the Strength of a Rook, and the Magic of a Bishop. She was called the Ultimate Queen because her husband needed a Mutation Queen Piece to turn her. - Echo_Fox2mthCommentedAll the people he killed or had indirectly killed.... deserved it!
- Echo_Fox2mthCommented
What?
Snape had been targeting him since he stole Snape's billion-dot collection last time. - Echo_Fox2mthCommented
What does this even mean?
This paragraph has been deleted. - Echo_Fox2mthCommented"Huh?" Ren, fortunately, was quick enough to activate infinity in time to prevent being kicked in the face by an angered Ashido, "The hell!? Why're you tryna kick me!?" He shouted in frustration.
- Echo_Fox2mthReplied to DaoistDemonEyesKyo
Attempted re-edit by Sasuke
'Should you kill your friends ? '