I never, in my wildest dreams, thought that I would like a book like this but it’s so intriguing and interesting, I can’t wait for the next chapter! Come on author, let’s get another chapter so your faithful readers can make one more step hust like the Sojourners. Thank you for your writing and for taking the time to write extra chapters. I think you have a winner!

Need more chapters! I love this book!

Four chapters please more chapters thank you.

I like the way the author described forest and the blood left behind on its leaves by those walking through.

Thank you but would you please help me with this. Thank you.

Also, love your book cover!

There is suspense, drama, and lots of adventure, and you only have two chapters so far! Wow! I noticed that you called the MC Samwise and later called him Sam. Also, several small errors in grammar. Other than that, this story has a great start and I am anxious to read more! Please update soon. You have a winner! update!

Will be glad to. Will do tonight. (9/21) here in U .S.

I am so enjoying your story that I hated to stop and do the review! It is well written, the characters are likable and are well described for the reader so that they can identify with them. Great job author! Another book for my Library. Thanks! Well Done!

Thank you Nutt_Sling for your review. I will look at each thing and work it as specified for clarity. Also, I will be giving your review shortly. Thanks again!

This story starts out sad, I felt sorry for the crawfish's fate but then a ray of hope, one egg with a golden halo, that attracts the beautiful but lonely koi. The koi proves to be a loving mother to the little crawfish but teaches disciple for cultuvation to become a human, wow! An incredible, well written story. Good balance and character description. Great job author! Another read for my Library!

Great story! The synopsis alone hooked me to read the book. There was some confusion at first for me with the mixing up of "she" and "he" but it in no way affected the story for me and I realize this was translated. Mar_Urbano, Great writing! Well done!

Another strong paragraph that grabbed me! End of life regret.

This paragraph is strong and it touched my heart . Great writing! I agree with Drapetomanic12, Wow!

Your book is exciting from the start! The death of the FL's sister was played out in a way that was belivable and held my attention. It made me eager to hear the rest of the story! I'm several chapters in and am adding it to my Library. Well written, grammatically and dramatically! Great job Author!

I love how the romantic plot is building, while at the same time, the MC's own story and his priority to save the Orthodox sect. is building. I love this book!