Review Detail of SolAce in Designed for Deceit

The FL of this book is portrayed well; I don’t have any issues with character design. However, there are several problems I wish to address: 1. Spacing- I’d say this is probably my biggest issue right now; the lengthy paragraphs makes it difficult to keep track of where I’m reading, and it prevents readers from being able to comment about any possible errors. My solution is to break up the paragraphs when there is a different person is talking or at least limit it to 4-5 sentences max. 2. Grammar and punctuation- I can see errors scattered here and there, but since the paragraphs are so long, it’s not easy to comment on it. 3. Also, I believe that in the chapter where Donna finds out that her husband is cheating on her with Deana...the names may be switched in some phrases, which confused me greatly. I would suggest that you revamp your beginning chapters to give the readers a clearer view at your book, and I hope you take it as constructive criticism instead of a negative review ! Keep up the hard work author, and don’t give up !