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Knight_Hawke

Knight_Hawke

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2020-03-05 JoinedUnited States
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  • Knight_Hawke
    Knight_Hawke2 years ago
    Replied to Silverkilam

    early dialogue that's more than likely not going to be in the final product fight

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  • Knight_Hawke
    Knight_Hawke2 years ago
    Replied to amiforyou

    huh?

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  • Knight_Hawke
    Knight_Hawke2 years ago
    Replied to OverlordBGs

    lol I know Jedi aren't bumped up this fast unless its a special case, times of war, or they are just prodigy/genius.

  • Knight_Hawke
    Knight_Hawke3 years ago
    Replied to Michael_Brightwell

    I appreciate it

  • Knight_Hawke
    Knight_Hawke3 years ago
    Replied to _VOIDLESS_

    ight

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  • Knight_Hawke
    Knight_Hawke3 years ago
    Replied to _VOIDLESS_

    I fixed it

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  • Knight_Hawke
    Knight_Hawke3 years ago
    Replied to XavierKing_6497

    while I could have it's clear their going to introduce Starfire and raven at some point

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  • Knight_Hawke
    Knight_Hawke3 years ago
    Replied to Miki_Marlo75

    I've made it so each character has their own unique dialogue and their own way of speaking and being able to tell who's talking and who's replying instead of doing your cliche of saying something and who's replying back only time I do is if it's sentence cut off by an interruption or just plain old thinking. There are small time jumps in the first few chapters because I'm keeping most of the young justice team and adventures the same. I'm not steering from the original vision just introducing a new antagonist and MCs who are not part of the Young justice universe but help shape them into better versions of themselves on both sides. yes I agree the Grammer needs work. I hope I answered most of your core issues with this fanfiction.

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  • Knight_Hawke
    Knight_Hawke4 years ago
    Replied to LukeMorningStar

    I'm not gonna change the pairings from the young justice it's literally just introducing the future of my original work which is about to drop soon

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    Knight_Hawke4 years ago
    Replied to LukeMorningStar

    what's the matter Luke?

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