Why did the author discard the game-related stuff? Everything was fine until he decided to drop it... now, Everything doesn't make sense at all. I don't mean I hate this story. Quite the contrary, but I am disappointed by his choices.

The writing quality was correct to me. Not exceptional, but not bad either. I've read many web novels where the author would write so badly that I had to use Grammarly to read his/her story correctly. In this story, corrections were minimal, but one thing was very tiring: "Shang this, Shang that, Shang this as well, Shang that as well..." Should I recommend you an aspirin before reading the first hundred chapters? I never understood whether it was the author's will or some beginner's mistakes, but I suppose it was the latter. The updates were good; nothing to say about that. The story development was decent. We start with nothing known and end with all the explanations needed to understand the whole thing. There was treachery, bond, and friendship. The character design was the main weakness of this novel to me. The MC was purely driven to destroy anything that he held dear for the mere sake of power (and destroying God), so, in the end, I found the Shang's character pretty poor and empty. It was obvious somewhere because he had discarded everything that made him "human". The world background was poor as well. No descriptions, no interactions with other kingdoms or villages. There were so many things to develop and so many things to discover in this world, but because of the pace (too fast to me), the author skipped a lot of things that would have made the WB much richer than it was. Another thing I missed was the MC's relationship. I would have liked more interactions between Shang and his friends. I deplore the lack of consistency between Shang & his "friends" and the lack of consideration towards them. Well, one thing was clear: the story has no interest in them because, in the end, they just disappear like nothing all along the story. Eventually, my evaluation is lukewarm. I wouldn't say it was a bad story, but it wasn't very good either. Many won't agree with my opinion, but who cares? I don't write to please them or not to please the author. (Author, if you read this, don't take my review to heart. I won't say you are a bad storyteller because I had fun reading this story, but that story won't remain in my heart either. Maybe your other story will have the opposite effect? Who knows?) Anyways, you should make your own opinion. If you have fun reading it, good for you. If not, well... bad for you? :D

I'm pretty sure the most used word has to be "Alex" in this story. XD

Good chapter, but... "But since Alex's mind could... the mana flowed into Alex's body." "As soon as the force entered Alex's Body..." "It was like Alex was taking a bath.." "Alex opened his eyes." Man, I don't know how you do it, but It's pretty tiring to read your story. When you read it once again before posting, don't you find it strange? There is no need to repeat his name in each sentence because nobody has been introduced between them. If you want to improve your text, just do it, and you'll discover a new world in your novel! The writing is concise and not too complex to read (sometimes, it's good though, having some literary words).

I started this story recently, and I have to say it's pretty interesting. A God sent a mere mortal in an otherworld to mess with it and become the most powerful man in the world just because he was bored. It looks like any other isekai story, but I liked that the MC is a MMA fighter. Right now, I'm satisfied with what I read, but there is a serious issue in t his novel : "Alex this, Alex that, And Alex, But Alex..." Author, if you read this review, could you just rectify this stylistic advice of yours in your story? Because this is very tiring reading each sentence with his name. We know he is called Alex; why repeat it every time? Is it on purpose? Anyways, only this thing bothers me. The rest will be discovered all along my reading. Good work o/

I agree partially with this statement. Indeed, the bigger the object is, the more resources are needed to move it, but the results are also much better. Proportionally, even though only a mana-core's energy matters on a body, the reciprocal is valid because the bigger the body, the more it holds energy. Your steps are much wider when you are taller, or your voice reaches farther because your vocal cords are bigger. Everything is proportional; If not, being big would be only useless.

eeeeh... One minute equals 60 seconds, not 120... and if 4 minutes have already passed, then there is no need to keep going for 2 more. Math isn't your strength, I suppose?

How is it possible she is only level 11? it was stated she was already level 25 previously.

As I read somewhere else: "Sometimes, Fate is a B****". I don't understand this hype around her. At some point, even if you want to feel sympathy toward her pitiful state, you can't help but grit your teeth because the plot is so twisted in favor of her survival. But as I would like to find fault with your plot choices, I must admit she deploys passionate conversations, and for this, you won. There is nothing more boring than a character who fits our taste perfectly. But I would add that when a character is too hated or deviate too much, the story also becomes boring. I want to warn you not to stretch this plot too long if you don't want your readers to stop following your story. I'll keep reading for now.

I wonder: How is determined that someone passed the ordeal or failed it? I had thought that, if you died in the ordeal, then you failed? Why is then I have the feeling that fact doesn't matter for Ruby and the other contestants? As they died before claiming their reward, they should have failed the ordeal then have to pass it another time? Or I am wrong? :/

After 85 chapters, it's my evaluation: Well, how should I explain...? This is the meta example: "Everything you shouldn't do in a story." It kinda reminds me of these fellow authors who, for the number's sake, keep fast posting but never tried to understand what they were writing. Where is the passion? Where is the love? Author, do you like your story? Do you like what you write? I'm sorry to ask you this because I'm also a writer and I know what it means to write, but even so, I'd like to find out why you don't put some effort into your writing. Moreover, apps exist to help you improve your skills; some are free, and others are to be paid. Well, it doesn't matter. The matter here is I'd like to evaluate your story, but I do not find any clues to make it. This is even sadder because the concept was interesting. I'll keep reading it because I want to know if your writing improves with time.

From the... what?

In the beginning, I wasn't expecting something great because of my few experiences with wuxia novels but I had to reconsider my POV after reading this story. Quickly, I've been immerged into the story & taken by it's pace. To be honest, I'm quite surprised by this novel and the overall quality of its plot, world building and characters. Firstly, the MC is somewhat 'Human' in his character. Said like this sounds funny but if you have already read others wuxia or asian novels, you should know what I mean. That very refreshing to read and each hour passed reading every chapter has been a bliss to me. Secondly, the deepness of the world-building is extraordinary because everything seems to fit. Cultivation is hard, yes and reading this story make you truly understand what it mean. Thirdly, I like stories where sexuality is depicted 'raw' without filters. Well, this is not what you think. What I mean is: everyone has its tastes and disgusts but wuxia stories tend to be Straight-oriented and rarely homosexuality is written (or for the fanservice sake only). Here, you have everything and there is no judgment. Fourth, women are respected, they have their own goal, their own wishes. They don't serve as dolls or foils for enlightening the MC and that's something to be noted. Eventually, if you wanna a good wuxia, read this one!

Thanks for your hard work 🤘I look forward to see the clash between Genevieve and himself.

Thanks!

I see. So will the Infinite Dream Physique's Upper limit be 100 like 100 % Or 1000? or Maybe more? but I don't understand well how his ascendency values and his 1000 billions of cosmos are related. Can someone explain me tha, please?

ho ho! An evolution... I wonder what wonders will appear then...

well, from the beginning, and from my (bad memories haha), I remember the only time when Noah has been unable to do something, It was when he has been rewinding time because of his "death". At this time, He was helpless because of the Time Unveiler and he has to use the dagger to rewind time. But from back then, he has never been in great danger. So I suppose this time as well, he will be able to do something utterly magisterial! 🤣

Great. So another event for Noah to shine! (Save the 'Weak' Princess Kathelyn from the old monster :P)

thanks for the description. Things are clearer this way!