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Review Detail of Netzach in Sword God in a World of Magic

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I started this story recently, and I have to say it's pretty interesting. A God sent a mere mortal in an otherworld to mess with it and become the most powerful man in the world just because he was bored. It looks like any other isekai story, but I liked that the MC is a MMA fighter. Right now, I'm satisfied with what I read, but there is a serious issue in t his novel : "Alex this, Alex that, And Alex, But Alex..." Author, if you read this review, could you just rectify this stylistic advice of yours in your story? Because this is very tiring reading each sentence with his name. We know he is called Alex; why repeat it every time? Is it on purpose? Anyways, only this thing bothers me. The rest will be discovered all along my reading. Good work o/

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Sword God in a World of Magic

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