Review Detail of Netzach in Sword God in a World of Magic

The writing quality was correct to me. Not exceptional, but not bad either. I've read many web novels where the author would write so badly that I had to use Grammarly to read his/her story correctly. In this story, corrections were minimal, but one thing was very tiring: "Shang this, Shang that, Shang this as well, Shang that as well..." Should I recommend you an aspirin before reading the first hundred chapters? I never understood whether it was the author's will or some beginner's mistakes, but I suppose it was the latter. The updates were good; nothing to say about that. The story development was decent. We start with nothing known and end with all the explanations needed to understand the whole thing. There was treachery, bond, and friendship. The character design was the main weakness of this novel to me. The MC was purely driven to destroy anything that he held dear for the mere sake of power (and destroying God), so, in the end, I found the Shang's character pretty poor and empty. It was obvious somewhere because he had discarded everything that made him "human". The world background was poor as well. No descriptions, no interactions with other kingdoms or villages. There were so many things to develop and so many things to discover in this world, but because of the pace (too fast to me), the author skipped a lot of things that would have made the WB much richer than it was. Another thing I missed was the MC's relationship. I would have liked more interactions between Shang and his friends. I deplore the lack of consistency between Shang & his "friends" and the lack of consideration towards them. Well, one thing was clear: the story has no interest in them because, in the end, they just disappear like nothing all along the story. Eventually, my evaluation is lukewarm. I wouldn't say it was a bad story, but it wasn't very good either. Many won't agree with my opinion, but who cares? I don't write to please them or not to please the author. (Author, if you read this, don't take my review to heart. I won't say you are a bad storyteller because I had fun reading this story, but that story won't remain in my heart either. Maybe your other story will have the opposite effect? Who knows?) Anyways, you should make your own opinion. If you have fun reading it, good for you. If not, well... bad for you? :D